Author of The Last Prince of the Mexican Empire, etc. |
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NATURE AND TRAVEL WRITING FOR THE VIVID DREAMER A handout with examples and exercises from C.M. Mayo's writing workshop as artist-in-residence at Guadalupe Mountains National Park May 2017 . For more resources for writers click here. |
We can think of the best writing about nature and travel, whether fiction or nonfiction, as instructions for the reader to form in his or her mind a "vivid dream," an experience of the world. How do we, whether as readers, or as any human being (say, folding laundry or maybe digging for worms with a stick), experience anything? Of course, we experience the world through our bodies, that is to say, through our senses: sight, smell, taste, touch, hearing-and I would add a "gut" or intuitive sense as well. |
From John Gardner's The Art of Fiction: |
"In the artist's recreation of the world we are enabled to see the world." |
See
"Techniques
of Fiction: The Number One Technique in the Supersonic Overview" See more recommended books on craft. . |
From Kenneth White's Across the Territories: Travels from Orkney to Rangiroa: |
"[Y]ou have to go out. You have to open space, and deepen place. Fill your eyes with the changing light." |
From a letter by Anton Chekov: |
"In descriptions of nature one should seize upon minutiae, grouping them so that when, having read a passage, you close your eyes, a picture if formed. For example, you will evoke a moonlit night by writing that on the mill dam the glass fragments of a broken bottle flashed like a bright little star, and that the black shadow of a dog or a wolf rolled along like a ball..." |
See "Emulation Exercises" . |
From Bruce Berger's The Telling Distance: Conversations with the American Desert: |
"Silence and slow time out of ancient seabeds, the sandstone heaved into red walls blackened with lichen and rain, stained with the guano of hawks and eagles." |
From Gary Paul Nabhan's Desert Terroir: Exploring the Unique Flavors and Sundry Places of the Borderlands: |
"I rub a few leaves between my thumb and forefinger, and their fragrance suddenly pervades the dry air, as if I had just broken a bottle of perfume against one of the sharp basalt rocks at my feet." |
From Mariano Azuela's The Underdogs (Los de abajo): |
"Below, at the bottom of the canyon, through the veil of rain, could be seen straight, swaying palms, their angled tops rocking back and forth until a strong gust of wind blew their foliage open into green fans." |
From Ellen Meloy's Eating Stone: Imagination and the Loss of the Wild: |
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From Terry Tempest Williams' The Hour of Land: A Personal Topography of America's National Parks (from the chapter on Big Bend National Park): |
"The desert is most alive at night... A flurry of moths becomes a white-winged blizzard; stalks of sotol glow like lit tapers on either side of the road. For eighty miles, we never pass a car." |
From Susan Shelby Magoffin's diary of 1846-47, Down the Santa Fe Trail and into Mexico: |
"Passed a great many buffalo, (some thousands) they crossed our road frequently within two or three hundred yards. They are very ugly, ill-shapen things with their long shaggy hair over their heads, and the great hump on their backs, and they look so droll running." |
See my
blog post about this extraordinary diary. . |
TO REV UP YOUR WRITERLY PERCEPTIONS . |
Here I provide my own answers from when I was walking a few days ago on Pine Springs Trail late in the afternoon. About half way down the trail, I stopped, sat down on a handy bench, and did these three exercises in my notebook. You can do this right nowor, perhaps at some moment while you are on a hike today. |
HUNT THE COLORS Pick an area that most people would decribe with one color, say, a yellow wall, or a green hillside. How many colors do you actually see? |
kelly green mint green straw green grey-green lavender-green khaki silvery green . |
TRIANGLE IN SPACE What two things do you notice in the distance? What two things do you notice very close to you? What two things do you notice behind you? |
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LIGHT & DARK .Where is the light coming light? What effects does it cause? |
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For
oodles more writing exercises, visit my workshop page which includes "Giant Golden Buddha" and 364 More Free Five
Minute Writing Exercises. See also my frequently updated list of recommended literary travel memoirs. |
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