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![]() NATURE AND TRAVEL WRITING FOR THE VIVID DREAMER A handout with examples and exercises from C.M. Mayo's writing workshop as artist-in-residence at Guadalupe Mountains National Park May 2017 . ![]() |
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From John Gardner's The Art of Fiction: |
"In the artist's recreation of the world we are enabled to see the world." |
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From Kenneth White's Across the Territories: Travels from Orkney to Rangiroa: |
"[Y]ou have to go out. You have to open space, and deepen place. Fill your eyes with the changing light." |
From a letter by Anton Chekov: |
"In descriptions of nature one should seize upon minutiae, grouping them so that when, having read a passage, you close your eyes, a picture if formed. For example, you will evoke a moonlit night by writing that on the mill dam the glass fragments of a broken bottle flashed like a bright little star, and that the black shadow of a dog or a wolf rolled along like a ball..." |
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From Bruce Berger's The Telling Distance: Conversations with the American Desert: |
"Silence and slow time out of ancient seabeds, the sandstone heaved into red walls blackened with lichen and rain, stained with the guano of hawks and eagles." |
From Gary Paul Nabhan's Desert Terroir: Exploring the Unique Flavors and Sundry Places of the Borderlands: |
"I rub a few leaves between my thumb and forefinger, and their fragrance suddenly pervades the dry air, as if I had just broken a bottle of perfume against one of the sharp basalt rocks at my feet." |
From Mariano Azuela's The Underdogs (Los de abajo): |
"Below, at the bottom of the canyon, through the veil of rain, could be seen straight, swaying palms, their angled tops rocking back and forth until a strong gust of wind blew their foliage open into green fans." |
From Ellen Meloy's Eating Stone: Imagination and the Loss of the Wild: |
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From Terry Tempest Williams' The Hour of Land: A Personal Topography of America's National Parks (from the chapter on Big Bend National Park): |
"The desert is most alive at night... A flurry of moths becomes a white-winged blizzard; stalks of sotol glow like lit tapers on either side of the road. For eighty miles, we never pass a car." |
From Susan Shelby Magoffin's diary of 1846-47, Down the Santa Fe Trail and into Mexico: |
"Passed a great many buffalo, (some thousands) they crossed our road frequently within two or three hundred yards. They are very ugly, ill-shapen things with their long shaggy hair over their heads, and the great hump on their backs, and they look so droll running." |
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TO REV UP YOUR WRITERLY PERCEPTIONS . |
Here I provide my own answers from when I was walking a few days ago on Pine Springs Trail late in the afternoon. About half way down the trail, I stopped, sat down on a handy bench, and did these three exercises in my notebook. You can do this right nowor, perhaps at some moment while you are on a hike today. |
HUNT THE COLORS Pick an area that most people would decribe with one color, say, a yellow wall, or a green hillside. How many colors do you actually see? |
kelly green mint green straw green grey-green lavender-green khaki silvery green . |
TRIANGLE IN SPACE What two things do you notice in the distance? What two things do you notice very close to you? What two things do you notice behind you? |
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LIGHT & DARK .Where is the light coming light? What effects does it cause? |
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