Author of The Last Prince of the Mexican Empire, etc. |
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EMULATION EXERCISES C.M. MAYO |
I admired
this fragment in Henry James's The Ambassadors (Methuen,
1903): ***the sky was silver and turquoise and varnish so I broke it down as follows: ***the sky was [some kind of metal] and [some of stone] and [some kind of liquid]. Mine: ***the sky was gold and sapphire and milk. ***the sky was tin and coal and whiskey. ***the sky was brass and amber and bootblack. A good writing exercise then would be to continue: do as many of these as you can, whether one, two, or seventeen. Then, circle the one that strikes you as the most vivid and/ or apt for the manuscript you are currently working on. |
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In reading Julia Glass's novel, Three Junes, I admired this passage: Paging through the news from afar, he finds himself tired of it all. Tired of Maggie Thatcher, her hedgehog eyes, her vacuous hair, her cotton-mouthed edicts on jobs, on taxes, on terrorist acts. So, breaking this into chunks:
Thus: describing my own character (an aging and overpowering spinster who has taken over the care of her nephew), I used this basic structure (with a little wiggle room) to come up with the following: Her lizard eyes, her coiled-up hair, her sharp-tongued pronouncements on his toys, his nap-times, his hot milk with sugared bread. I decided I quite liked just the first part her [name of uncommon animal] eyes, her [quirky adjective] hair so I came up with these: Her angel-fish eyes, her dumpy hair Her ferret eyes, her over-blown hair Her Shetland pony eyes, her indecisive hair His raccoon eyes, his ludicrous toupee His weasel eyes, his cockamamie comb-over and so on... |
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From the Daily 5 Minute Writing Exercises: January 25 "Permutation" This is what I call a "permutation exercise": Take a particularly vivid and rhythmic sentence or two from someone else's book or story, and then exchange the verbs and/or adjectives and/or adverbs and/or whatever to make it your own. For example, while reading Conversations with Gore Vidal (edited by Richard Peabody and Lucinda Ebersole), I came across this vignette in the piece by Larry Kramer, "The Sadness of Gore Vidal": "He is very fat. His face is lined. His hair, all of which he still has, looks like its in the end stages of a coloring job. He says he has to worry about his health. He orders a steak." Here's my permutation on that: She is very thin. Her face is as smooth as a child's. Her hair, which is sparse and frizzed, reminds me of what might be a fried mermaid's. She says she is ravenous. She orders the sardine sandwich, sans bread. And another: He is huge. His face appears to have been inflated. His hair has been slicked back with a strong-smelling lotion. He says he hasn't time for more than a quick bite. He orders the rack of lamb. Do as many permutations as you can on this, or on another selection. No rules. |
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