A
much-celebrated poem
that amounts to a lista luminous listis Robert
Pinsky's "The Shirt."
How to make a list into something
poetic? It helps to be attentive to and creative with diction
drops and spikes, repetition, scansion, and alliteration. I've
already posted on diction
and on repetition; in future
months look for posts on scansion and alliteration.
Herewith, taken from a few favorite
works, are some examples of poetic listing and to get the
most of this, to really hear the poetry, I would suggest that
you read these aloud:
"During the first days
she kept busy thinking about changes in the house. She took the
shades off the candlesticks, had new wall-paper put up, the staircase
repainted, and seats made in the garden round the sundial; she
even inquired how she could get a basin with a jet fountain and
fishes."
Gustave Flaubert, Madame Bovary
"We eat our supper (cold biscuits, bacon, blackberry
jam) and discuss tomorrow. Tomorrow the kind of work I like best
begins: buying. Cherries and citron, ginger and vanilla and canned
Hawaiian pineapple, rinds and raisins and walnuts and whiskey
and oh, so much flour, butter so many eggs, spices, flavorings:
why, we'll need a pony to pull the buggy home."
Truman Capote, A Christmas Memory
"Tonight he wished for little things, the chance
to take a hot bath, a reasonable suit of clothing, a gift to
bring, at the very least some flowers, but then the room tilted
slightly in the other direction and he opened up his hands and
all of that fell away from him and he wanted nothing."
Ann Patchett, Bel Canto
"The carriage was crammed: waves of silk, ribs of
three crinolines, billowed, clashed, entwined almost to the heights
of their heads; beneath was a tight press of stockings, girls
silken slippers, the Princess's bronze-colored shoes, the Prince's
patent-leather pumps; each suffered from the others feet and
could find nowhere to put his own."
Guiseppe di Lampedusa, The Leopard
And an example I also used in the post on repetition (money,
money, money):
"Tancredi, he considered, had a great future; he
would be the standard-bearer of a counter-attack which the nobility,
under new trappings, could launch against the social State. To
do this he lacked only one thing: money; this Tancredi did not
have; none at all. And to get on in politics, now that a name
counted less, would require a lot of money: money to buy votes,
money to do the electors favors, money for a dazzling style of
living..."
Guiseppe di Lampedusa, The Leopard
"I Will," one of the
poems in my new collection, Meteor, is a list. You can
read it here.
To take this further, as you
are reading whatever you happen to be reading, note in your notebook
whenever you find, in your view, any especially apt use of poetic
listing. (More on reading as a writer here.)
P.S. More resources for writers
on my workshop page.